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The ainger tairs at me, the beast within growl at you.

You better run, you better hide I dont know how long he'll supside.

I feal the chainges, I feal him takeing over.

Realize now youre life is over.

The chain snaps, the cage brakes

Here I am in youre face.

I smell the fear, you see the hate

it bean a while since I've ate.

 

 

You can ru you can hide

Sooner or later youre going to die.

 

I will post more when it comes to me...

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The ainger tairs at me, the beast within growl at you.

You better run, you better hide I dont know how long he'll supside.

I feal the chainges, I feal him takeing over.

Realize now youre life is over.

The chain snaps, the cage brakes

Here I am in youre face.

I smell the fear, you see the hate

it bean a while since I've ate.

You can ru you can hide

Sooner or later youre going to die.

 

I will post more when it comes to me...

 

let's spell check this and make it legible.

 

The anger tears at me, the beast within bark at you.

You better run, you better hide, I don't know how long he'll subside.

I feel the changes, I feel him taking over.

Realize now you're life is over.

The chain snaps; the cage breaks.

Here I am in your face.

I smell the fear, you see the hate.

It's been a while since I've ate some cheese fries.

You can run, you can hide.

Sooner or later you're going to get pwned.

 

now that i've read it, i think that could be the most dreadful song i've ever read. bleh

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Bump for an awesome set of lyrics. See if anyone knows who wrote them.

 

 

Maybe I'm not ready for this, and you know it.

Maybe I'm too scared to tell you what I'm really thinking

It's not fair to stay together because of regrets we might have.

I don't want to fall asleep alone, but do I want to wake up with you?

I'm only trying to be completely honest.

 

So I guess this is the ending or a beautiful mistake.

And if we both agree that we shouldn't be together why does it hurt so much?

I feel like I lost my closest friend.

I don't want to fall asleep alone, but do I want to wake up with you?

I hope you're happy and completely lonely.

 

There I am standing all alone on Sydney Harbor Bridge.

And you know I would jump into the f*cking ocean if it meant I was truly capable of being satisfied.

Well I ever be?

Did I just give up the best thing I ever had?

 

I don't want to fall asleep alone, but do I want to wake up with you?

I hope you're happy and completely lonely.

I don't want to fall asleep alone, but do I want to wake up with you?

I'm only trying to be completely honest.

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yeah its a good song. i like the ataris, but i havent listened to them in a while.

 

my favorite song by them is probably San Dimas High School Football Rules

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can you feel it? ive felt it for so long.

this is only the 3rd draft of this song

oh oh there's something about it though

it cant be written wrong.

 

so now its 11:11 dear

you should know that your picture is sittin here

Ive got a wish and im singing it loud and clear

and it goes like and it goes like

 

can you feel it? ive felt it for so long.

this is only the 4th draft of this song

oh oh there's something about it though

it cant be written wrong.

 

I just want someone to hold on to.

I risked my wish in a catchy song for you.. so now what are you gonna do?

 

Looks like forever because just ever is never enough.

Now im sitting and counting the days until im tongue tied im tongue tied.

 

was it an accident that we should be like this?

we were only makin' out.. we were only makin' out

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yeah its a good song. i like the ataris, but i havent listened to them in a while.

 

my favorite song by them is probably San Dimas High School Football Rules

 

 

Yeah, that is how I was. I just thought about it yesterday adn decided to pop in some of their CD's and listen. They are amazing lyrically. Nothing complicated, just kind of read your mind on what you have always wanted to say. Maybe it's just me though.

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no definitly, their lyrics are straight foward and to the point. they are awesome.

 

the new band that im in love with is Secondhand Serenade. all acoustic, frackin amazing. you'd probably like em solLess.

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To you, I ask, why?

 

Why.. does it still hurt?, its been so long!

 

No longer does anything feel, real

 

*Your the only one that I love!*,

 

For all that I have become,

 

I still feel so alone, in the end..

 

Why have I, become, so numb,

 

No one else will do,

 

For only to you, do I still belong.

 

"*cry* *Oh*"

 

You where my greatest friend,

You where my only love,

 

And now,

You are someone else,

 

To you its for the best,

An I love you all the rest,

 

Years past, till today,

 

Where has all my tears gone?,

 

Where now do they belong?,

 

When the clouds last night, cryed out,

 

I saw you there, All alone,

 

I held you in my arms,

 

I told you,

 

That 'Im still here',

 

She simply held me more,

 

Then closed her eyes

 

*cry did I*

 

She said that, 'still you are, the only one'

 

'Only to you, do I belong',

 

'Only for you, is my love',

 

Then she walked away,

 

What looked like tears, in her eyes,

 

So too you I ask,

 

Why?,

 

Why does it, still hurt?,

 

Why can it, never be?

 

To you, I ask,

Why?

 

 

 

 

'Slow solo acoustic guitar throughout'

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Evil song much ?

 

 

Everyone posted nice songs and yours is all about killing people. Whatever man. You're insane.

 

Yes I know. But I like death mettal. Zombi and manson just to name a cuple.

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Bump for an exremely emo song I wrote to her when we broke up. Just to get a point across and be overly dramatic so she could see what I was saying for once.

 

Why don't things turn out, the way originally planned ?

Your stumbling, I'm stumbling, please take my hand.

I'm searching for a reason, a reason why I love,

Or is this just a hope, something I'm dreaming of ?

No, no, it's real, I just see it all unclearly,

Is it me, is it you, or is it love that I'm fearing ?

I follow my heart, no matter what it shall tell,

I know in the end it'll be worth all of the hell

That I put myself through in order to get with you,

Everyone keeps telling me it's a dead end, that I'm going nowhere.

I can't and won't listen; I just can't help but see how much I love her.

I realize I shouldn't feel this way and should give up,

But I see something I love and will never let it go.

I have to respect myself, but I love her ever so dearly,

I'd give up my life so that she could see things clearly.

Without her, my life lacks meaning.

I miss her touch, her kiss, and most of all - personality.

I miss her voice, her laugh, her eyes, and her beautiful smile.

Most of all, I miss wondering if she is finally happy.

But she isn't, and it kills me to know.

She asked for space, something I thought I could give.

I now see I can't, it makes it hard to live.

When we don't speak, I feel empty, lonely inside.

I made the decision, which still gives me mixed feelings, I don't know why.

She is my life, she is my one and only.

I want nobody else. Without her, I barely want life.

 

 

I would never take my life, but it got my point across and sounded great.

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